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Flygfyren Revision 3

I've aded the logo with the original web adress. I've syncronized all the fonts. I've added the icons you liked. I've spaced out the elements in the lower part of the design. Let me know what you think.


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  • filipscridon
    filipscridon
    • 8 anos atrás

    what clutters up the design are those color icons, wich need to be fairly lare to be visible. It's the reason I went for the simple monocolor ones in the first place

    • 8 anos atrás
    1. fredrikse
      Proprietário do Concurso
      • 8 anos atrás

      If you have a mail address I can email you what I meant about the border at the bottom. An example.

      • 8 anos atrás
    2. filipscridon
      filipscridon
      • 8 anos atrás

      Hello. Thank you for the feedback.

      Freelancer.com doesn't allow posting contact info, but you can upload a screen capture with the desgin with the border somewhere and then post here the link.

      The problem with borders is that they brake the design in boxes, and our brains doesn't like boxes, so I usually try not to use them. My first design used something that resembled a button but was less dominant yet easy to read. Another thing that you have to take into account is that not all that look good on screen look good on paper. When printed and cut to size the overall perception changes. But I will try anyway.

      I will try centering the main text.

      I will align all the design elements.

      The color of the text is the deep blue from the logo. Personally I like it, but if you think it is to serious, I could try finding a shade of orange (which brings energy, and also works well with blue).

      • 8 anos atrás
  • fredrikse
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 8 anos atrás

    I think it's to compact. The design needs more air. And I still want to see a more classic font for the text elements.

    • 8 anos atrás