Anton, You have done a very good job but I think that in some cases the pictures seems to be overused for the work. You may also have lost time in changing some of the pictures around.
Assuming these are A4 sheets as mentioned in my requirement there is significant screen real estate lost in number of pages with less focus on who we are and what we do.
Your presentation is fantastic.... if you had come a bit earlier with something original like this then you would have certainly been a winner by a mile.
Right now it is 50:50 between you and another bidder . Again our partners..... lot of screen real estate lost. I would have preferred a good balance.
I hope next time when we work together which I am sure we will .... please keep that in consideration. Thanks and all the best.