Design single-panel illustration or cartoon symbolizing a gossiper or gossiping (multiple winners possible)

Status: Closed
Prêmio: $30
Inscrições Recebidas: 21
Vencedor: lokmenshi

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Proprietário do Concurso
- 10 anos atrás
#32 nice touch here. Thanks!
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Hotata
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Look at #33 , the red version of the #28
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1. Proprietário do Concurso
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  See my comment on top
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2. Proprietário do Concurso
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  You were right on 33 (: thanks
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Hotata
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Look at #38 the modification of the #33 . Good luck. If you want another version, tell me, no problem...
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Proprietário do Concurso
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#33 (28) with the other guy I mean the guy that is listening to the gossip, the offender kept REd. Thanks again!
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Proprietário do Concurso
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#33 thanks for the modifications. Sorry, just like one other modification to make it perfect. Change colour of the other guy in the background back to black again. That would make it perfect for us!
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fabioandrade
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#36 is my last entry, hope you like it, and I already thank you for the contest, the competition was very good and your feedbacks were also excellent, I hope we have more contests like this in the future.
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fabioandrade
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Have a look at #34 and #35 , i am working in my last one right now, i will submit son.
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Proprietário do Concurso
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#27 like the (overall) style and composition. Unfortunately it does not bring the message over. Thanks!
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Proprietário do Concurso
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# 28 sorry, just doesnt work for us this time, fierce competition also. We see good skill in you portfolio. The monkeys? Up to you!
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Proprietário do Concurso
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#31 we don't get it but we like your (general) approach! Maybe too subtle?
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Proprietário do Concurso
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# 25, the shadow got you the extra star. Good stuff!
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hamzfat
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Hiiii... CH.. Any feedback for me ? #26
thanks before .. :D
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Hotata
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Look at #28 .
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1. Proprietário do Concurso
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  #28 strong! Two gossipers in the back change of colour (into Red) would do the trick for us. Thanks!
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Proprietário do Concurso
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#25 we like the coloured charaqcters, what we miss here is facial expression. Please put victim on background. Thanks!
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fabioandrade
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Check #24 , hope you like it.
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Proprietário do Concurso
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# 22 We see what you mean but we don't get the feeling. Maybe because the green doesn't work here. Try white?
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Proprietário do Concurso
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# 19 unfortunatelly does not work with us.
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Proprietário do Concurso
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# 20 original approach! Good fun. Doubt if the symolism is strong enough.
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Proprietário do Concurso
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# 21, nice job and we like the tone of voice, especially like the two guys. More emphasis on the offender might work (with coloyrs) but we are not sue.
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Proprietário do Concurso
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# 23,16 victim works! thanks. If not too much please present side character in grey scale. See how that works out.
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Hotata
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Look at #21 , is something different.
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Proprietário do Concurso
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#17 We like the approach showing the offender THE EFFECT of gossiping. You are category leader in the contest!
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Proprietário do Concurso
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#18 We see nice style but a little bit too obvious. Please read previous comments and briefing for details.
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Proprietário do Concurso
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#10 like offender, but too much emphasis here on second character (mouth, filling image).
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Proprietário do Concurso
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# 15 like offender character, the other not sure ...Victim in background could work here.
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Proprietário do Concurso
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#16 nice traditional cartoon style. To our opinion the best in that categorie till now. Victim in background could work here but not sure.
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Proprietário do Concurso
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#13 competition is to fierce, we don't see back the already suggested different improvements that you can read in all the comments.
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fabioandrade
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I am woking on it, I intend to send five illustrations, probably tomorrow.
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Proprietário do Concurso
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@ current and new contenders. We hope for more variety. See attached examples for inspiration: worlds greates gossiper and people gossiping on the background. Reminder, we are committed to (and now expect) multiple winning designs ...
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Proprietário do Concurso
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# 7, 14 we have a male version. Still missing is subtle emphasis/accent on the offender (gossiper). Thanks!
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Proprietário do Concurso
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#9 as a finnishing touch, can you please change the pink for red ...
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1. lokmenshi
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  Thanks for the feedbacks! I've changed it to red on #11 .
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fabioandrade
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I am working on it, i will submit tonight.
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Proprietário do Concurso
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#6thanks voor the entrie. But we don't see the offender (the gossiper who receives the postcard).
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lorikeetp9
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Hello I would like to ask you want to add some kind of a text or just a illustration ? Thank you.
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1. isaacvcardenas
  - 10 anos atrás
  can you give me some feedback on my entries? it would be much appreciated
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2. Proprietário do Concurso
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  @ Hi there Isaac. Symbolism definetely there. Improvements we would be happy with: 1. emphasis/accent on the offender. Male version or maybe you have an idea about a neutral/universal version (not male/female).....? Thanks!
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Proprietário do Concurso
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#7 strong symbolism here! We like the less is more approach. Improvements we would be happy with: 1. emphasis/accent on offender. Male version. Neutral/universal version (not male/female).
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Proprietário do Concurso
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@Enoeth. Thanks for your entries. It is not exeactly what we are looking for (the contest is about single panel cartoons). We do like the one idea with the sheep.
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#8 improvements we like: more emphasis on GOSSIPER. He/she/it must stand out (as the offender). We think it cab be done with minor adjustments (line colour etc.)
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Proprietário do Concurso
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#8convincing post! I see 1. strong symbolism. 2. Good less is more appraoch (what we look for!) 3. own distinctive style. Possible improvements
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