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E Khattaba

This is my second entry. A more abstract and simplified version. Thanks

Inscrição nº 44 do Concurso para E-Khattaba Logo

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  • mohammedhaddad88
    mohammedhaddad88
    • 1 ano atrás

    show time

    • 1 ano atrás
  • LaCynn
    LaCynn
    • 1 ano atrás

    NICE!

    • 1 ano atrás
  • popohouse15
    popohouse15
    • 2 anos atrás

    very excellent logo

    • 2 anos atrás
  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
    • 2 anos atrás

    Hi, I've uploaded the revised version at entry #80.

    • 2 anos atrás
  • saraalmudhaf
    Titular do Concurso
    • 2 anos atrás

    I like the contrast in face size of the man's and woman's. I like that they are asymmetrical, not identical, and not a reflection.

    • 2 anos atrás
  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
    • 2 anos atrás

    Sure, right away.

    • 2 anos atrás
  • saraalmudhaf
    Titular do Concurso
    • 2 anos atrás

    I like how you filled the gap between the man's chin and woman's nose with a beard. So useful and very well utilized. However, I am not a fan of the negative space under the woman's chin. Would you experiment with that please or just close it up or minimize it. Thanks

    • 2 anos atrás
  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
    • 2 anos atrás

    Thank you four the insight. i will get back to you right away.

    • 2 anos atrás
  • saraalmudhaf
    Titular do Concurso
    • 2 anos atrás

    Try using the same mustache for the woman's lips. Change color and reflect (upside-down). Try slightly bigger eyes for both without eyelash for woman. This is also a characteristic of Arabian eyes. Try again a closed eye for the womanonly, this time with eyelash. I like the idea of the blush for the woman but not so much the execution (the blur). It is not in harmony with the whole style. I like the shadow of the ear and chin.

    • 2 anos atrás
    1. saraalmudhaf
      Titular do Concurso
      • 2 anos atrás

      I believe closed eyes will successfully communicate a forehead kiss and support the current position of the man over the woman. Check entry #47 for reference.

      • 2 anos atrás
  • saraalmudhaf
    Titular do Concurso
    • 2 anos atrás

    I love the color scheme.

    • 2 anos atrás
  • saraalmudhaf
    Titular do Concurso
    • 2 anos atrás

    I'm very happy.

    • 2 anos atrás
  • saraalmudhaf
    Titular do Concurso
    • 2 anos atrás

    Try to experiment with the gold headpiece for the woman. It would add more cultural context. Try to unify all gold stroke thickness including the black headpiece for the man (one thickness). Thank you.

    • 2 anos atrás
    1. saraalmudhaf
      Titular do Concurso
      • 2 anos atrás

      Entries #47 #36

      • 2 anos atrás
  • saraalmudhaf
    Titular do Concurso
    • 2 anos atrás

    I like the digital pattern design. Works very well with e- as in digital or electronic.

    • 2 anos atrás
  • saraalmudhaf
    Titular do Concurso
    • 2 anos atrás

    I can see a heart (right one). I like it.

    • 2 anos atrás
  • saraalmudhaf
    Titular do Concurso
    • 2 anos atrás

    I love it.

    • 2 anos atrás
  • saraalmudhaf
    Titular do Concurso
    • 2 anos atrás

    This is so far my very best! Thank you.

    • 2 anos atrás

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