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Process illustration #4

Hello,I tried to make a gear as a line phase,Please feedback may be I can modified

Inscrição nº 14 do Concurso para Process illustration: Illustrate/design a diagram of a process
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  • Ragnar2424
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 5 anos atrás

    After taking another look at your entry #15 ... there's a lot to like about that one too! Specifically, we like the arrows used for the "Outcome" text boxes; however, we think those "arrow shaped" text boxes are probably more applicable to the 4 "skills". And then use your "funnel" shapes and design from your very first submission (entry #5 ) for the "Outcomes". Lastly, we the writing on the inside of the gears that you did for #15 (we'd just suggest using a dark blue instead of black for the fill)!

    • 5 anos atrás
  • Ragnar2424
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 5 anos atrás

    Also... Please remove the gears in the top left corner. And please move the faded grouping of gears (currently in the top right) to the bottom left. Lastly, go ahead and delete the title "Moving with agility..." (but keep the subtitle "Value Creation Chain"). We'll be inserting your diagram onto our slide (so the title and background will mostly need to match all our other slides).

    • 5 anos atrás
  • Ragnar2424
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 5 anos atrás

    We prefer the simplicity of this one. We also really appreciate the attention to the "evolution" of the gears (with each phase getting a quarter of the fully completed gear). If we could each of the gears to be equally sized and interlock with one another that would be a solid improvement. We also think that they could be placed in the background so that you can just see the interlocking in the spaces between the text boxes, i.e. all the text is overlapping the gears. Alternatively, we could move all four gears to the bottom of the page? Thanks again for this entry!

    • 5 anos atrás