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I have re-written the article now with proper title. The article has been broken down to simpler terms so that it it easier for a newbie to understand the process it is talking about. Hope you like it. Also, like mentioned before, writing articles from the beginning or re-writing them usually takes me a few hours to complete with corrections made to grammar and spelling and also formatting. Will be looking forward to your feedback.

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  • sumaiya505
    sumaiya505
    • 4 meses atrás

    Thank you for the rating. This is anything more I can do for you? Feel free to let me know.

    • 4 meses atrás
  • dasolanogalarza
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 4 meses atrás

    hi Sumaiya thank for the new document, it is far better. Just a suggestion, when you make an affirmation like "most of the electrical power is mainly..." or " life-span is limited due to cracks..." you need to put the source, if you can't find a reliable source where you got this information, dont put in an article.

    • 4 meses atrás
    1. sumaiya505
      sumaiya505
      • 4 meses atrás

      Thank you for the feedback, I didn't find any line to line source of the article but just an overall one, but will surely keep it in mind.

      • 4 meses atrás
    2. sumaiya505
      sumaiya505
      • 4 meses atrás

      Would you like me to write another article on this?

      • 4 meses atrás