Business Poster for Green House Aquaponics

Status: Closed
Prêmio: $100
Inscrições Recebidas: 7
Vencedor: HappyStudio

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maslam84
- 10 anos atrás
sir this in not eye catching poster font size very small no alignment no balance .........what is this ? where is ur message ?
- 10 anos atrás
bprashant83
- 10 anos atrás
Sir I had withdraw my work for time being. I am still in contest, don't declare results before time.
- 10 anos atrás
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1. Proprietário do Concurso
  - 10 anos atrás
  do you have time to do it in the next 15 hours? We need it very soon from someone who can make quick changes and can communicate over the next few hours.
  - 10 anos atrás
2. bprashant83
  - 10 anos atrás
  I am very sad that I can't give time but I know I can did better than that. No problem thanks!
  - 10 anos atrás
mumar6256
- 10 anos atrás
SEE my entry #31
- 10 anos atrás
rivera919
- 10 anos atrás
Comments on #21 please...
- 10 anos atrás
1. Proprietário do Concurso
  - 10 anos atrás
  this is one of my favorites. it just needs more contrast between a black and white background and a colorful foreground. look at how clean #7 is. the contrast is clear. javascript:void(0)Also the text at the bottom should be "the future of good food has finally landed." GREAT job
  - 10 anos atrás
2. rivera919
  - 10 anos atrás
  Thank you Sir. I can definitely revise those items for you.
  - 10 anos atrás
dwrlox22
- 10 anos atrás
Good Day to your Sir

I am currently looking for a job in the Cultivation Area in California, I would be able to support you with Cultivating & Designs. Please give me a message, i would love to work with you guys. Currently live in Switzerland, but would like to move to CA soon.

Also saw this contest 40 minutes before end, I hope you like my 10 minute sketch. We can do it more professional if you make me the Winner. Thanks allot
- 10 anos atrás
1. dwrlox22
  - 10 anos atrás
  #28
  - 10 anos atrás
elgopi
- 10 anos atrás
Hi! pls check #26,#27. Thank you.
- 10 anos atrás
1. Proprietário do Concurso
  - 10 anos atrás
  look at #7 , #17, and #22 . We like because they are polished, simple, and professional. Also 19 21 are good because they are simple and make a clear point.
  - 10 anos atrás
anshdeb
- 10 anos atrás
Please rate #16 and let me know for any changes :)
Thanks
- 10 anos atrás
1. Proprietário do Concurso
  - 10 anos atrás
  creative but too dark and depressing. we want very clean and professional like #17.
  - 10 anos atrás
maslam84
- 10 anos atrás
please check my new entry 24 & 25# thanx
- 10 anos atrás
1. Proprietário do Concurso
  - 10 anos atrás
  these are great, just less text. Just the name of the business, the product offering, and "the future of good food" and incorporate the Green House logo bigger
  - 10 anos atrás
trsuk1
- 10 anos atrás
#19 #20 Hi there I have tidied my entry up as it looked a bit tatty I also have tried it as cartoonish please check them out and all feedback welcome good or bad Thank You
- 10 anos atrás
1. wademd
  - 10 anos atrás
  lulz... tatty... nice word! I need to use that one. Nice illustration btw.
  - 10 anos atrás
bprashant83
- 10 anos atrás
Hi lolish22, Nice concept. where you are from. you had done any degree in designing. I had completed BFA (commercial art) and working as web designer from India.
- 10 anos atrás
1. lolish22
  - 10 anos atrás
  Hi bprashant83! Thanks for the comment:) I love your entry you definately have my vote, good luck!
  - 10 anos atrás
2. bprashant83
  - 10 anos atrás
  Thanks lot:)
  - 10 anos atrás
elgopi
- 10 anos atrás
Hi! pls check#15. Ibelieve this would satisfy your requirements.. Thank you.
- 10 anos atrás
dotlight
- 10 anos atrás
#14 feed back is appreciated.
- 10 anos atrás
bprashant83
- 10 anos atrás
Thanks! for ranking, I am bit confuse about headline can you do suggest me.and how I can improve it.again this contest end today itself?
- 10 anos atrás
lolish22
- 10 anos atrás
Hi any feedback on #8? Thanks
- 10 anos atrás
1. Proprietário do Concurso
  - 10 anos atrás
  look at design #7 . it is very clean and clear, it states a clear message and has a focal image to support that message. The focal point should be the greenhouse & greenhouse logo. The grey logo should be in a corner. #8 there is too much and it's not clear what the purpose is. Think about how simply and clearly a message can be conveyed: http://www.powerhousemuseum.com/the80sareback/wp-content/uploads/2010/03/gremlins.jpg
  - 10 anos atrás
2. Proprietário do Concurso
  - 10 anos atrás
  The message we want to convey is that the food we grow is the best and the most environmentally friendly. we are "the future of good food"
  - 10 anos atrás
lolish22
- 10 anos atrás
and #9 please:)
- 10 anos atrás
JoomlaGenies
- 10 anos atrás
please check #2
- 10 anos atrás
1. Proprietário do Concurso
  - 10 anos atrás
  Hi, the graphic is nice, but it really doesn't communicate anything specific about our business or our mission. We're offering an alternative to the destructive current food production system by providing a way to sustainably grow vegetables and fish. We need more specifics that speak to this in the poster, and some kind of representation of a greenhouse, with vegetables inside, is key. Thanks!
  - 10 anos atrás
lolish22
- 10 anos atrás
hi guys any feedback, please see pmb for details
- 10 anos atrás
1. Proprietário do Concurso
  - 10 anos atrás
  Hey Lolish, thanks for submitting and being creative. The important thing to note is that we want to highlight our business, which should be the focal point. keep it simple and elegant and the tornado should not be the highlight, it should be overshadowed by the beauty of our business. make sense?
  - 10 anos atrás
trsuk1
- 10 anos atrás
#3 Please check #3 any feedback welcome good or bad .just would like to know is this what you had in mind.
- 10 anos atrás
1. Proprietário do Concurso
  - 10 anos atrás
  #3 is good but the whole scene is sad. We want to show that our business (greenhouse) is the solution to problems. perhaps everything in B&W and the greenhouse like an oasis. try the tornado in the background fading away and all the problems under the greenhouse
  - 10 anos atrás
bprashant83
- 10 anos atrás
Hi,
I have one question, that you want to add discipton of products you offering or only the concept about your business.or it may be good message, kindly reply soon
- 10 anos atrás
1. Proprietário do Concurso
  - 10 anos atrás
  perhaps have 3 elements 1)the greenhouse 2) the product line 3)vision:"A world where people are empowered to take care of their own food needs and have access to healthy affordable food." We just want it clean and professional.
  - 10 anos atrás
Baddestboots
- 10 anos atrás
Nice concept you got going there. I really like the Wizard of Oz theme. I wish I was a good artist and could make you the poster you want.
- 10 anos atrás