create funny facebook ads video

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I am looking to create a really funny facebook ad. one that has a great hook to grab peoples attention from the moment they see the video.
My wife and I own a coaching business where we help entrepreneurs create systems to strengthen their marriage by developing marriage business balance. I am looking to create a short 1-2 minute ad video targeting married entrepreneurs who work too much and feel like the business is taking all of their time and attention and there is nothing left to give to their marriage and kids. the ads will be to book a game plan call so these overwhelmed entrepreneurs can get relief from the entrepreneur grind. The target of this ad is male entrepreneurs who are married with kids. they work too much and are stuck in the entrepreneur grind. these men give everything to the business and their family becomes second place on accident. they miss family meals, miss important family activities, feel like the connection is fading in their marriage and that the business is taking over. the entrepreneurs become a slave to their business.
The video should show a mom home with the kids and things are wild, crazy and out of control at home because the father is not present. one way you can create the video is to is to show the home with the father absent, then switch to the office with dad working. then show the family eating dinner and doing home work without dad. show dad working late into the night and missing kids sports and other activities.

Kristine Mirelle is the inspiration for the funny ads. she can be found in the Facebook ads library.

Laugh My Ads Off - by Kristine Mirelle on YouTube
https://vimeo.com/750759976
https://laughmyadsoff.com/

Kristine is a performer so not my niche, but her ads can be a good reference for potential ways to make the video funny. i don't have and specific models in the relationship space.

my example script
Are you an entrepreneur that wants to be a more present husband and father? If you’re tired of being stuck in the entrepreneur grind, want to show up better at home and develop better marriage business balance Listen up!
I Have my Balancing Marriage and Business Bootcamp that gives you the systems to a thriving marriage
In fact, the way this works is... (you gain more quality time with the people that matter most in your life without taking time away from the business)
You’ll get systems and frameworks you can quickly implement “SO THAT” you can ACHIEVE
Marriage business balance WITHIN 6 weeks and have more quality time with your kids, deeper connection with your wife and the tools to create the relationships you desire
So, if you are a married male entrepreneur with kids who is tired of being stuck in the entrepreneur grind and want Complete marriage business balance,
click below and let’s get started!
https://calendly.com/rfamilystrong/gameplan

script i modeled
WHO
Hey INSERT IDEAL CUSTOMER. If you’re tired of INSERT PAIN POINT HERE and want INSERT
DESIRED RESULT HERE, Listen up!
WHAT:
I Have INSERT PRODUCT OR SERVICE that INSERT WHAT MAKE IT SPECIAL
WHY
In fact, the way this works is... (INSERT WHY IT WORKS)
WHEN
You’ll get DESCRIBE SERVICE OR THING THEY GET MORE IN DEPTH “SO THAT” you can ACHIEVE
CERTAIN RESULT WITHIN INSERT CERTAIN TIME PERIOD and ACHIEVE 1-3 ADDITIONAL PERKS
AND BENEFITS (More benefits and results they’ll get)
HOW:
So, if you’re a INSERT IDEAL CUSTOMER. And you’re tired of INSERT PAIN POINT HERE and want
INSERT DESIRED RESULT HERE, Click below and let’s get started!

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WordprezPro
- 3 meses atrás
please check #35 and #80 if need any changes or improvements please let me know. Thank you
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abirsadika2010
- 3 meses atrás
WHY YOU ARE WAITING FOR IN #32 THERE ARE 5 STARS AND IF YOU LIKED IT PLZ CHOOSE ME BY SEEING THIS VIDEO ( #32 ). I AM SUPPORTING YOU FROM MANY DAYS YOU KNOW IT. WATING FOR YOUR REPLY.
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please check #35
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sazzadrashed
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Please check #34
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sazzadrashed
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Please don't close the contest, I will submit an entry.
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1. Proprietário do Concurso
  - 3 meses atrás
  read the comment below first for this comment to make sense.
  Are you an entrepreneur that wants to be a more present husband and father? If you’re tired of being stuck in the entrepreneur grind, want to show up better at home and develop better marriage business balance Listen up! I Have my Balancing Marriage and Business Bootcamp that gives you the systems to a thriving marriage In fact, the way this works is... (you gain more quality time with the people that matter most in your life without taking time away from the business) You’ll get systems and frameworks you can quickly implement “SO THAT” you can ACHIEVE Marriage business balance WITHIN 6 weeks and have more quality time with your kids, deeper connection with your wife and the tools to create the relationships you desire So, if you are a married male entrepreneur with kids who is tired of being stuck in the entrepreneur grind and want Complete marriage business balance, click below and let’s get started!
  - 3 meses atrás
2. sazzadrashed
  - 3 meses atrás
  Please check #34 , I hope you will love it.
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ahmed3lsayed
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Please don't close the contest
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abirsadika2010
- 3 meses atrás
contest holder, if you think my videos( #23 #30 #32 ) are not nice to submit ad in any social media plz reply me. I am making a new video. PLZ MAM REPLY ME AND IF YOU LIKED MY GIVEN VIDEO.CHOOSE A AD FROM MY GIVEN VIDEO. WAITING FOR YOUR REPLY
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abirsadika2010
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PLEASE CHECK #32 BECAUSE I MAKED THIS VIDEO SO NICE.WAITING FOR YOUR REPLY
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abirsadika2010
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check #30
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abirsadika2010
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new video, check #23
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devrajkwsik
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Proprietário do Concurso
- 3 meses atrás
still working on gathering up some examples. just about to go to bed so i will put some things up in the morning. a good starter place for some playful videos is Laugh My Ads Off - by Kristine Mirelle youtube channel.
- 3 meses atrás
1. abirsadika2010
  - 3 meses atrás
  i maked #11 and you said another now i maked #15 check that hope you like it waiting for your reply
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KHALEDabo3WAD
- 3 meses atrás
Please, Wait for the end of this contest. I will send you a very pro video.
My portfolio:
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1. abirsadika2010
  - 3 meses atrás
  checked but not so nice
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abirsadika2010
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check #15
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abirsadika2010
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plz check #11
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Please check #10
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MohamedEssam50
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i need reference
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WordprezPro
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Please share data I.e. photo/video
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Please share example video and image.
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need example .and script
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