Graphic Design for One page web site for the Saint Of the Internet: St. Isidore of Seville

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  Proprietário do Concurso

  • 11 anos atrás

  Dear RockPumpkin, Art2B, and DesignSektor,
  
  I want you to know that I believe you have all done an amazing work, and that the three designs are really good,
  so it's practically "unfair" to choose a single one,
  
  I'll be picking Pumpkin one, but again, they are all good,
  and I really look forward to work with the three of you in the close future,
  
  Thank you and best regards,
  
  Andres

  • 11 anos atrás
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     RockPumpkin

     • 11 anos atrás

     Thank you so much Sir. Please wait for the final design with html and CSS...

     • 11 anos atrás
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  browncoder

  • 11 anos atrás

  plz find the design no #27.Waiting for your feedback .Thanks

  • 11 anos atrás
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  Proprietário do Concurso

  • 11 anos atrás

  one general comment,
  
  I checked for the best wording instead of wish/prayer and it seems to be "implore" for the button to send the form,
  and implorations for the former list of wishes/prayers,
  
  entry 14 looks good,
  the "buts" I see there are:
  the background went to simplistic,
  although the iPad frame is ok, the content in it is to iPad-ish, meaning very web2.0 and not to Gothic baroque or renaissance,
  
  the entry 12 looks to "child-ish" and harry potter-ish,
  we are looking more for a religious look,

  • 11 anos atrás
  1. 

     ionutlexx

     • 11 anos atrás

     thx for the feedback , i will make something new very soon .

     • 11 anos atrás
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     mreis1

     • 11 anos atrás

     thx once again. i'll work on it.

     • 11 anos atrás
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  ART2b

  • 11 anos atrás

  #18

  • 11 anos atrás
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     ART2b

     • 11 anos atrás

     whssf, thank you for coming feedback :)
     #18

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  ART2b

  • 11 anos atrás

  Done :)
  Check #17

  • 11 anos atrás
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  mreis1

  • 11 anos atrás

  design almost finished

  • 11 anos atrás
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     mreis1

     • 11 anos atrás

     #14

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  joka232

  • 11 anos atrás

  #11 thankyou

  • 11 anos atrás
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  RockPumpkin

  • 11 anos atrás

  Please review #9 Thank you for the feedback

  • 11 anos atrás
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  Proprietário do Concurso

  • 11 anos atrás

  entry 8 is very very good, the color palette near perfect,
  the only defect it has is that the layout and boxes look "game-ish" and less like "renaissance" (which is the look we seek)
  and I wonder how multi-line vs short messages will play along in the two column listing,
  
  entry 7 is close to perfect as well, if it could only be just a bit more "renaissance" and less web 2.0 font types,
  it lacks the email/twitter field as well,

  • 11 anos atrás
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  Proprietário do Concurso

  • 11 anos atrás

  entry 8 is very very good, the color palette near perfect,
  the only defect it has is that the layout and boxes look "game-ish" and less like "renaissance" (which is the look we seek)
  and I wonder how multi-line vs short messages will play along in the two column listing,
  
  entry 7 is close to perfect as well, if it could only be just a bit more "renaissance" and less web 2.0 font types,
  it lacks the email/twitter field as well,

  • 11 anos atrás
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  Proprietário do Concurso

  • 11 anos atrás

  As they stand I am preffering designsektor's a bit more over mreis',
  
  Both entries just help me realize what is that I wanted:
  
  the full size saint image blending in the background -designsektor-
  
  the name of the saint needs to stand out very clear -mreis-
  
  the "all in one" functionality in the page, (no need to click to get a form) -designsektor-
  
  more space given for the wish list -mreis-
  
  gray background better than the yellow, although the monitor frame and margins may take to much space out of the screen for the message display
  
  all the color themes are good,
  (although I like a tid bit more the tendency to taking light out of the colors a bit more)
  
  I just realize that in the form,
  I would need a small second text field for the wisher to enter an email or twitter handle if they want to locate their wishes later,
  
  so just a little modification adding
  a little 20 char space text field probably at the same level of the submit button,
  
  Thank you!

  • 11 anos atrás
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     mreis1

     • 11 anos atrás

     thanks for the feedback, i'll try something new later

     • 11 anos atrás
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  RockPumpkin

  • 11 anos atrás

  Can you provide a feedback and rate my entry #7 Sir please? all of the design elements are 100% codable...

  • 11 anos atrás
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  RockPumpkin

  • 11 anos atrás

  Please wait for my entry

  • 11 anos atrás
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  Proprietário do Concurso

  • 11 anos atrás

  narrowing down the requirements:
  dark theme preferred, (or darkened colors)
  the name of the saint must appear and be clear,
  full image saint blended with background at the left side,
  box for the prayer, optional little text field for the email or twitter handler,
  all in one page, (no click to get to the form)

  • 11 anos atrás
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  berhoum

  • 11 anos atrás

  see an example:
  http://cutt.us/dz-I8O

  • 11 anos atrás
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     nimeshniranjan

     • 11 anos atrás

     hello

     • 11 anos atrás
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  Proprietário do Concurso

  • 11 anos atrás

  I see civis4design entry as way to simplistic, and without any visual relationship or harmony between the five diferent elements proposed in the page,
  (background, saint picture, text, input field, and text list)

  • 11 anos atrás
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     CIVIS4DESIGN

     • 11 anos atrás

     please try to express more
     
     take this way by example :
     background : color / use this / like this / do not ....
     saint picture : ...
     text ...
     
     if you can give me the saint picture

     • 11 anos atrás
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  CIVIS4DESIGN

  • 11 anos atrás

  please check and review #1
  could be changed and improved , thanks

  • 11 anos atrás

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