Professional company Bio and story needs writing.

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  • Prêmio: $50
  • Inscrições Recebidas: 26
  • Vencedor: GavinParish

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We are a new company and I have just had a go at writing a bio for our website and possibly to be used in some local newspapers. I'm not a professional writer and would like help with making our bio shine.I have attached the bio, it is in Australian English, please submit all entries in Australian English. This is the first of many articles and we would like to find a winner to write for us into the future.

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  • ssethumadhavan
    ssethumadhavan
    • 4 anos atrás

    I think I just missed the deadline by a minute can I send the entry

    • 4 anos atrás
  • ssethumadhavan
    ssethumadhavan
    • 4 anos atrás

    @vantuaboy could you please provide me one message that your readers should carry forward after reading this article, I am planning to submit an article hence if you can do that it would be great for both of us. Else I will take the last paragraph of your article as the one, which I have noted for reference. "Aquamarine Personalised Home Care is committed to providing the highest quality non-medical home care services and treating all clients, of all ages with dignity and respect.

    • 4 anos atrás
  • ssethumadhavan
    ssethumadhavan
    • 4 anos atrás

    @Vanuatabosy, Could you please describe the relationship between Brian Farrel and Barry Holland. Are Brian and Barry completely un related? Could you let me know if Brian's Grand parents and Barry's father are connected.

    • 4 anos atrás
  • writersquality
    writersquality
    • 4 anos atrás

    @vanuatuboy: Dear Sir. Please have a look at entry#28. This is my third entry to contest. Hope this time I did it the way you asked. Please give valuable feedback.

    • 4 anos atrás
  • mynk16
    mynk16
    • 4 anos atrás

    @vanuatuboy

    Read out the Messages section of #24. It's very important.

    - Mayank

    • 4 anos atrás
  • vanuatuboy
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 4 anos atrás

    similar length, yes improve vocab, organised as you see best

    • 4 anos atrás
  • smshah
    smshah
    • 4 anos atrás

    Can you please specify exactly the requirements ?
    Should the length be the same as the sample or less?
    Should the vocabulary be improved? Should it be more formal or inclined towards informal language?
    Should the article be organised more or the same structure be used?

    • 4 anos atrás
  • vampyfree
    vampyfree
    • 4 anos atrás

    Hello vanuatuboy, i hope you can read in image submitted..or else i will send word file. :)

    • 4 anos atrás
  • writersquality
    writersquality
    • 4 anos atrás

    I'll submit my entry very soon.

    • 4 anos atrás
  • TheGuyver2040
    TheGuyver2040
    • 4 anos atrás

    Vanuatuboy,

    Would it be possible for you to guarantee payment?

    • 4 anos atrás
    1. vanuatuboy
      Proprietário do Concurso
      • 4 anos atrás

      Thank you

      • 4 anos atrás
    2. TheGuyver2040
      TheGuyver2040
      • 4 anos atrás

      Done. See entries #2 and #3.

      • 4 anos atrás
  • Reejurekh
    Reejurekh
    • 4 anos atrás

    Can you please guarantee the contest?

    • 4 anos atrás
    1. vanuatuboy
      Proprietário do Concurso
      • 4 anos atrás

      I just guaranteed it now, apologies I'm new to this.

      • 4 anos atrás
  • shashankroy
    shashankroy
    • 4 anos atrás

    I can do this . Please contact me

    • 4 anos atrás

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