Rework an How to Shave Guide

Status: Closed
Prêmio: £110
Inscrições Recebidas: 13
Vencedor: michelledmilne

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Looking for a creative writer/marketeer to rework a small document of approximately 400 words. I have written in my own hand and passed to someone to check for accuracy, it just needs reworking to by a little more upbeat, ensure it is well written and of course grammatically correct. It is for Traditional Shaving products so should also reflect that.

Nice little project, happy to share end result for a portfolio after it has been typeset (if required).

Ideally this project would be suited to a English Speaker, British would be preferred, and maybe someone used to writing in a more traditional manner.

Two files attached (OpenOffice and Word), THESE ARE NOT FINISHED IN AS FAR AS THEY HAVE NOT BEEN CHECKED FOR ACCURACY, but should assist you in making your decision.

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“There was a clear difference between the effort Michelle put in on this project and that of the other entries. She followed the brief to the letter and made continual efforts to finalise promptly. 5*”

wiredcircuit, United Kingdom.

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stardust4me
- 7 anos atrás
Please review entry #15 thanks
- 7 anos atrás
michelledmilne
- 7 anos atrás
Please check entry #14 ! Thanks, Michelle
- 7 anos atrás
PriscillaEdits
- 7 anos atrás
#7 -- What is it you're not satisfied with, exactly?
- 7 anos atrás
michelledmilne
- 7 anos atrás
Hi! when you get a chance, can you please look at the comment I posted on our private message board? Thanks! -Michelle
- 7 anos atrás
1. Proprietário do Concurso
  - 7 anos atrás
  I replied to the one on your second entry. I can find no other messages.
  - 7 anos atrás
Proprietário do Concurso
- 7 anos atrás
Just a quick reminder, this is a guide, not a white paper, or a blog article. Snappy, creative but traditional. Im no writer, but watch usage of 'the, a and your', maybe this would be helpful https://www.trumpers.com/shaving_tips.cfm
- 7 anos atrás
michelledmilne
- 7 anos atrás
Please check #10 and #11 when you get a chance. And, if you could provide any feedback that would be highly appreciated! Best, Michelle
- 7 anos atrás
ashishyadavcool
- 7 anos atrás
#3 A humble second attempt.
- 7 anos atrás
Proprietário do Concurso
- 7 anos atrás
Traditional, Old hand folks. The products we retail have been sold since 1790. They are not a new age Gillette/Wilkinson Sword Brand.
- 7 anos atrás
Proprietário do Concurso
- 7 anos atrás
OKay, I have uploaded documents in two different formats. It is being proof read for accuracy at the minute, so maybe subject to slight change. I have also Guaranteed the project for those of you that asked. Thank you for your interest.
- 7 anos atrás
1. ashishyadavcool
  - 7 anos atrás
  #1 Please have a look. Thanks!
  - 7 anos atrás
ashishyadavcool
- 7 anos atrás
#1 Please have a look and let me know your views on it. Will make any changes if required. Thanks! #sealed
- 7 anos atrás
TheGuyver2040
- 7 anos atrás
The product name is Badger Hair Shaving Brush, correct? Has a trademark been issued? Also, how will this guide be marketed? Direct-to-consumer or online?
- 7 anos atrás
TheGuyver2040
- 7 anos atrás
Thanks for attaching the files! Would it be possible for you to guarantee payment?
- 7 anos atrás
laneyberry
- 7 anos atrás
Hi there! Would it be possible for you to send the document over? :) I'd love to try my hand at this.
- 7 anos atrás
1. TheGuyver2040
  - 7 anos atrás
  This is unrelated, but the artwork for that game looks nice. The character designs and text reminded me of JRPGs from the old PS One days.
  - 7 anos atrás
TheGuyver2040
- 7 anos atrás
#guaranteed
- 7 anos atrás
TheGuyver2040
- 7 anos atrás
Wiredcircuit, Please attach the document to the contest brief.
- 7 anos atrás
alwayswrite01
- 7 anos atrás
Hi there, a professional content writer and copywriter here. I can rework your small document to make it readable, interesting, educative and attention-grabbing. Please send the document to me.
- 7 anos atrás
LeeA91
- 7 anos atrás
Hey, I'm up for giving this a go, chuck me the document!
- 7 anos atrás
twomedia
- 7 anos atrás
Hey, please message me in private, I would like to work on this project!
- 7 anos atrás