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Hi Sir!

Please refer the video was edited, have voice and script (will have professional voice if i win). Please let me know If you want to change something. I hope my video fit with your requirements and I will the winner of this contest to finish it early. And link my text script : http://www.mediafire.com/view/7jd2t0w5c4wcv1i/script.txt

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  • elmadoo
    elmadoo
    • 8 anos atrás

    cool

    • 8 anos atrás
    1. PT1589
      PT1589
      • 8 anos atrás

      Thanks :)

      • 8 anos atrás
  • sulayman360
    sulayman360
    • 8 anos atrás

    Congrats

    • 8 anos atrás
    1. PT1589
      PT1589
      • 8 anos atrás

      Thanks :)

      • 8 anos atrás
  • gkhanpolat
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 8 anos atrás

    0.11s: "diet" does not look terrible enough :). the scene looks more happy :)
    0.13s: the garbage flying away does not look nice.
    0.27s: No screenshot. better animation like 0.48sec.(see example video too)
    1.24s: the "finish" is made clear not motivated.
    1.48s: a congratulatory banner in the background would be good. similar to a marathon.

    There are no sound fx in the video

    • 8 anos atrás
    1. PT1589
      PT1589
      • 8 anos atrás

      Thanks, I just fix the video first. If you ok, I will the sound to finish video.

      • 8 anos atrás
  • gkhanpolat
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 8 anos atrás

    At the moment u have the best chance to win

    • 8 anos atrás
    1. PT1589
      PT1589
      • 8 anos atrás

      So, Can I a winner now with new edit follow your requirement.

      • 8 anos atrás
  • PT1589
    PT1589
    • 8 anos atrás

    Please check the link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B56dnTdZXQA&feature=youtu.be

    • 8 anos atrás
    1. PT1589
      PT1589
      • 8 anos atrás

      I hope you are satisfied with this edit.
      The ending of the video, I do't know exactly what you want to change, can youn help me explain further.
      I will correct more if you want to change. Do you think I'm qualified to do the winner for this contest. Waiting your feedback.

      • 8 anos atrás
    2. gkhanpolat
      Proprietário do Concurso
      • 8 anos atrás

      And the ending wie dont need adress and contact. Just Logo. See example video

      • 8 anos atrás
  • gkhanpolat
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 8 anos atrás

    Here are some suggestions:

    10s: if the medicines, books etc are shown and fall into trash or something like that.
    14s: the women go to meet many people in the background lean against (against the crowd go)
    42s: the animation is not nice and it is not clear the weight check. How will the checked weight? What and how can I do this? (these are very important points)
    1.43s: there are only white people. a black person also please.
    1.43s: from above also raining a little money.
    1.50s: The information phone number, address and email are required.
    a final logo was enough.

    Please keep a copy of this video so that we can compare it.
    sorry for my english

    • 8 anos atrás
    1. PT1589
      PT1589
      • 8 anos atrás

      Thanks for your valuable suggestions.

      • 8 anos atrás
  • gkhanpolat
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 8 anos atrás

    a professional voiceover is not necessary because I need that voice over in German. I'll add later.

    it needs to be changed later, the texts in the video. but I think that's not a problem.

    • 8 anos atrás
  • gkhanpolat
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 8 anos atrás

    Thanks for the video. It looks very good. It's fun to watch the video and it is informative. But it falls, the explanation of how we check the weight of players (proof image).

    • 8 anos atrás
    1. PT1589
      PT1589
      • 8 anos atrás

      Thanks for your feedback, I will add an explanation check the weight of the players and send you soon.

      • 8 anos atrás

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