"Who We are"? & "What we do"? & and "What difference does it make"? & "What's in for the Customer"? edit for my Marketing campaigns.
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I'm looking to have some editing done under "Who We are"? & "What we do"? & and "what difference does it make"?on my website. For more information please go to [login to view URL] or read my current boring text is as follows down below. I have thought about it intensively for a while but could not come up with anything better. I would like to see something different that could be created not just the typical that is going on everywhere in the market today like " I could save you money". I would use that but incorporated into the possibility of some potential new concept or helpful idea.
From our beginning by Adriatic Sea to Foothills of the Rocky Mountains, Adria Building Services is a well-established family-owned and operated cleaning service provider for Colorado Springs. With more than ten years experience, we promise you excellent reputation for our professionalism and first-rate service. At Adria Building Services we believe in doing this right the first time, every time. Adria Building Services does not charge their customers like the latest "big name franchises ". We've got a significant advantage over our competitors because we pass the savings onto you. Your money stays right here locally, allowing us to support our local economy and hire the best to take care of your business. We understand that your reputation is important when it comes to everyday business. You want to welcome your clients and visitors to a professional environment while your employees thrive in their work place. Adria Building Services can help. We cater to all businesses, from small offices to large commercial facilities and any size in between. Our services can be customized to meet your needs.
I have written my own boring text but I'm not as talented as some of you. The key here is to make this story where I'm came from my background which is Europe around Adriatic Sea very fun, appealing, attractive and interesting and exciting and "Understood" to read that will keep the reader interested in it, the key here is when someone reads it here in the us Colorado where I currently reside is that the reader feels the "Connection" and "Love" and "Whats in for the Customer"? instantaneously after reading the story, that the reader knows where that is and how that relates to place where I and the potential customer currently lives. Reader should understand my history, company vision, mission and the core values of my company and why they should go with me and not the big company. This story should be described as unique adventures in way of telling "who we are" ? "what we do"? and "what differences we are making what sets us a part from the competition". You can use if you choose to some positive quotations that will build confidence in the customer. Long story short I just would like to see the possibility of better. I appreciate everyone help on this project.
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“Good writing skills, provided some good ideas.”
adriabuildingser, United States.