Freelancer: ReadySaid
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Children's Book

Hello, my friend; I have written you the completion of your story. I hope you like my text. It is exciting and has a lesson. I also cannot wait to work with you on other projects. I am also waiting for your valuable and helpful opinion. You can contact me at any time.

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  • ReadySaid
    • 4 meses atrás

    Ok I understand, you want it to be simple, I will modify as i can, thanks.

    • 4 meses atrás
  • CRich808
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 4 meses atrás

    Hi Said, I am expecting American kids to understand the story and the language. There are pieces of this story that I don't understand. For instance 'the latter'. I'm assuming it is a 'teacher or coach', but I'm not certain. The children that came up missing are the campers who are the team members of the football team. Where did they bring the firewood to..thank you.

    • 4 meses atrás