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  • CRich808
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 4 meses atrás

    Thank you Hem. This story does not expand on the storyline given. Also, feedback,,the first paragraph you mention, 'there lived a boy'. Then you say 'she' and 'her'. In the future, be careful with that.

    • 4 meses atrás
    1. Rosiepayne477
      Rosiepayne477
      • 4 meses atrás

      Thank you so much for your words. I will try to not the same mistake again in the future and learn from my errors. I will work harder.^^

      • 4 meses atrás