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The Chosen One

Daanav, a powerful magician, skilled in dark magic, is abducting children to train them in dark magic and recruit them in his army. The Chosen One must step up to stop Daanav and bring back these children from him.

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  • CRich808
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 4 meses atrás

    Thank you Utkarsh. This is a good story, but it does not expand on the storyline in the instructions. Also, I'm not sure about the punctuation style with the use of :

    • 4 meses atrás
    1. utkarshdiwaker14
      • 4 meses atrás

      Hi Cindy, really appreciate your feedback. Thank you for reading my story.

      • 4 meses atrás