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Ashberry Hills

Here is my take! I paid heed to all of the instructions you gave and made it as interesting as I could. My language is simple enough to be understood by children but at the same time can aid them to expand their vocabulary which I think is essential. In my opinion it makes up a huge chunk in why children should read in the first place. It's fun and adventurous with a splatter of jokes here and there. Hope you like it!

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  • CRich808
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    • 4 meses atrás

    Thank you Zara, this is a good story, but doesnt completly follow the instructions that they are on a team building camping trip..
    I certainly agree with you that children should read!

    • 4 meses atrás