need revise!! rhetorical analysis essay

Hey there!

Teacher's comments:

1- You need to rework the thesis and focus on sentence-level editing, throughout.

2- Include the article title in quotation marks (each time for each article)

3- the sentences that I highlighted, you should delete them because they are forecasting statement . write a thesis statement instead.

4- Adjust format and spacing for WORK CITED.

PLEASE Follow the prompt and the link because I want it perfect it is going to be my final draft and my teacher will check everything by the prompt

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Habilidades: Elaboração de relatórios, Research Writing, Redação técnica

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