Rewrite a short story to kids level. change from current 18 yrs level to 10 yrs - new freelancers welcome

Hi, Please read the extract at the end of project description. to understand the language. New native english freelancers welcome, best price please, i need a new tent myself. Hi I have a 5000 word short story, that needs to be taken from it current language and simplified so a 10 year old can understand. I propose the freelancer does a short example of one or two sentences to qualify for the winner bid. for example: This is 21 yrs plus version Oh Carolina fitted sexily and tightly into a space suit. Skim was next to pre-eclampsiastic as he helped oh Carolina on with boots. this is 16 yrs plus version Oh Carolina fit nicely into her new “space suit” as she called it, and Skim helped her on with some new crescent shaped boots. Please supply these two sentences as for a 12 year old. and quote for the whole story an example below: This is the 16 year old version; The sun let the trees tops Orange where pine cones hung crisp and dry the seed long since flown. It was the dawn of dusk, still turquoise waters stretched into the far off white skies. Oh Carolina followed foot prints to the water edge and watched seaweed roll in the tide and lift spritely again. Oh Carolina stepped into the ocean and swam out into the still evening waters. She turned onto her back, stretched out, and let her eyes close. She had the sensation that she was spinning. She looked up but no, she was not spinning. She closed her eyes again. Maybe the sea is spinning she thought, and she imagined toast floating in milk then she imagined a spoon paddling ripples and tides in the milk. There then came a noise. Unlikely a boat out this way, thought Oh Carolina, but she thought it best to look. Her eyes broke open first to blighted stars, then, right in front of her, a passing shadow in the water reached for her;