Fiction Novel Review & Feedback

I’ve completed a full-length fiction manuscript and now need a fresh, professional set of eyes to help me polish it for publication. Rather than a line-by-line copy-edit, I’m after big-picture insight: an honest, reader-level assessment of what lands well and what might hold the story back. Here’s what I’m hoping to receive: • An annotated version of the manuscript highlighting moments that disrupt flow, cause confusion, or feel out of character. • A concise editorial report (2–4 pages is fine) summarising overall strengths and weaknesses, with clear suggestions that can guide my next revision round. Your feedback should cover story continuity, pacing, character appeal, dialogue authenticity, and anything else that stands between this draft and a publishable novel. If you spot smaller grammar or punctuation issues as you read, feel free to flag them, though the primary goal is general impressions and actionable guidance. The manuscript is ready to send in Word or Google Docs, whichever you prefer. I’m happy to answer preliminary questions, share a sample chapter, or agree on milestones so we both stay on track. Looking forward to collaborating with someone who enjoys storytelling and can help me lift this book to a professional standard. I have used ProWritingAid in getting this novel finished. It has 37 chapters and approx 85, 000 words

ID do Projeto: 40013140