Im a published author and I need help asap. I have attached the first chapter of my book, THE ART OF DYING, and I am looking for a professional US editor to
check the flow...There shouldn't be more than 1 - 2 hours work...Everything is proofread several times.
My goal is for the first chapter:
To make it easy for the reader to understand what they can expect.
Share with the reader...:
1. What is this book about. 2. What to expect. 3. Why I wrote it.
4. Why is it so hard to cope with death and dying (cultural taboo)
5. My own story and perspective, to make them relate to me..
ADD a few extra sentences where it makes sense.
QUICK DRAFT..."I have addressed my beginning chapter to those of you who are dying. However for you as loved ones, it is important to say that half of the books is written for you. Being diagnosed with a terminally illness is a very difficult situation both for the person who are dying and for you as relatives. How you as loved ones cope, support and say the final goodbye is important for your pease at mind for years to come when u have to live on.
I suggest that you read the whole book to get insight from both the perspective of being terminally ill and a loved ones soon to be left behind. Knowledge is a platform to have better talks and find some pease at mind.
.heartfelt compassion for ...susan binau
There shouldn't be (to many errors left, so don't spent time rewriting the chapter, except for the small text I just wrote.... Just make sure the chapter flows naturally...Rather delete something that is irrelevant or confusing...
My target group is terminally ill and their loved ones...(Mr. and Mrs Johnson)
I hope to hear back asap...
Warmly Susan Binau
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I can do this for you! I noticed a couple of grammatical errors in the sentences you said to add in. I can correct those for you, and check the rest of the chapter for flow and ease of reading. Check out my reviews!
I have a Masters Degree in Counseling and have taken courses in this area. I agree with the statement that it is a taboo to many cultures. I would love to assist you.