The goal is not less but be more reader friendly and take out the jargon, too many Sanskrit words, be more palatable to the average reader, and be more compelling, not preachy.
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Better to use IE as the webpage is old and does not work too well with other browsers...
I need the result in a word/wordpress doc not the latest, dox because I only use .doc