I need a text that will motivate girls to join new social network for girls.
Please excuse my English, feel free to post comments for any clarifications.
This should be a kind of "sales letter" that will be placed at the landing page of social network for girls. However it shouldn't sell anything, but it should motivate girls to register in this network.
Current version of text is located at: <[url removed, login to view]> . The text is written by myself, so it may contain grammar mistakes. It contains brief description of the main features.
You should write the sales text that describes all features in an attractive manner, motivating girls to join community (main audience are girls 9-18 years old). I suppose that the final text should contain around 1500-2000 words, but I'm open to suggestions about the word count.
Some good ideas for the text can be found at the pages of [url removed, login to view] website. That site is related to parents of little kids, while my site is related to girls, however main ideas are common, as:
1. Possibility that member's photo will be noticed by casting agents and model business agents, especially if the member wins monthly or yearly contest.
2. Cash prizes for contest winners
3. Possibility for member to become popular in real life, in her school and town. E.g., even if a member doesn't win general contest, she may win local contest between members from her town or state
4. Any other ideas will be appreciated.
I will appreciate if you provide links to your previous work in your bid, or if you upload an example of your previous work as the bid attachment.
It would also be great if you also offer your ideas and suggestions about the project in your bid.
I prefer native English speakers for this work.