rewrite document a

i need to rewrite the document attached called "sh". + it needs to be completely rewritten and should not be in a conversational tone as in the document itself. + when rewriting it might require you to add new or rephrase existing sentences to make a better flow or sense of things. it might also require you to delete sentences where appropriate. also, it might require you to re-structure and move certain passages to another part of the document as it might make more sense. So you must be a good wordsmith. The end product is supposed to sound more formal and informative and less conversational. + attached is also a finished sample "tg_sample" on how a finished rewrite might look like that is acceptable. More work available upon finish.