Here's a shorter proposal that includes a question to the client to encourage them to hire you:
Hello,
I would love to work on your project to analyze customer data and segment customers into groups based on their behavior, preferences, demographics, or other factors. My extensive expertise in data analysis and segmentation will help your business personalize marketing strategies, optimize pricing, and improve customer retention.
To achieve this, I will conduct a thorough analysis of your customer data, use advanced analytical tools to segment customers and deliver actionable insights and recommendations. With this approach, I can provide a data-driven solution that will help your business grow and succeed.
May I know when you would like to discuss your project further? I look forward to hearing from you soon and working with you to achieve your business goals.
Best regards,
Ibrahem Saleh