I'm writing an Ernest FanFiction piece just for passion. I have the general story finished and I want someone who is good at writing stories to give ideas on what I can do with the characters to make their storyarcs (and the story in general) more compelling for the reader. This is just the storyboard, and not the actual full piece. I want the freelancer to think within the story and the world i've already created to help me improve upon my idea. When I finish, I'm going to find someone who can animate it so I'll have a finished product I can be proud of. Who knows, maybe i'll start writing comic books eventually!
I'm not a trained writer and this is my first story so I also want your explanations why you think the suggestions you make should be added, so that you're teaching me in the process how to create a good story.
What I have is just 11 pages of paragraphs with 3 Acts. Within the Acts I have scenes labeled Scene 1, Scene 2 and Scene 3. Then I just have paragraphs of the story, what the characters might do and say. I'm unsure of the proper way a story idea is supposed to be presented on paper, so feedback on technique is appreciated too. I'm very familiar with the characters, as they all come from various Ernest films and shows.
I'm only looking for a Ghostwriter - credit of your help will not be given on the final piece.
This is a very simple task, so I'm thinking around the $30 mark. I'm only asking for creative feedback.