Hi, I would like to write a monthly email to my Real Estate clients to keep them up to date on the market. I wrote the details of what I want to say but it doesn't sound good. Can you help me make it sound better? I feel that the content is good but I would like to soften it up so it sounds better. Can you help me? Here is what I wrote.
"The Real Estate market saw it’s strongest start to November in over 7 years here in the Roscoe Village area. The first week of November saw home sales rise 30% over the same period last year and 60% over 2 years ago. Falling interest rates and the end of the government shutdown helped drive sales higher too. A big factor helping the market as well was a lower inventory of homes for sale. Many homeowners have taken their homes off the market for the winter, which is helping to generate demand for the remaining homes for sale.
If you’re curious about the single best week to list a home for sale, when inventory is at it’s lowest and the number of buyers looking is highest, let me know and I’d be happy to discuss.
I hope you have a great November.