I am in the process of writing a RFP/RFQ for a new ecommerce site. The RFP/RFQ will be posted on sites such as this one, elance, etc. The draft is four pages long. I am looking for a person with expereince in writing these types of proposals to assist. I am not looking for someone to write the proposal for me or do fine tuning. I am at the conceptual stage and I am looking for a critique to makes sure that I have missed no major conceptual errors or made any obvious gaffes. I am not looking for an on-going commitment.
1) All deliverables will be considered "work made for hire" under U.S. Copyright law. Buyer will receive exclusive and complete copyrights to all work purchased. (No GPL, GNU, 3rd party components, etc. unless all copyright ramifications are explained AND AGREED TO by the buyer on the site per the coder's Seller Legal Agreement).