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Context (important): I’m hiring multiple editors for independent feedback. A previous freelancer told me the copy needed “moderate” improvements, but then returned almost no applied edits and didn’t provide proper Before→After / Track Changes. So in this project, I need two things: (1) an honest quality rating, and (2) clean, reviewable line edits (not notes-only). Work size (for pricing clarity) Text size is approximately: Characters (with spaces): 8108 Words: 1364 Characters (no spaces): 6609 It’s a quick read (a few minutes). I need a US-English naturalness check + light line edits, not a rewrite. Files you will receive (Word docs) — important This copy is used across 10 landing pages (homepage + 9 supporting pages). Pages 2–10 share the same core “master” section (about 80–92% identical). The only real differences are the headline/subheadline + a short unique intro at the top of each page. To save your time (and avoid asking you to review 10 separate pages), I organized everything into 3 Word files: 1. MASTER [login to view URL] The shared core section used across the site (the main logic, diagnosis, process, offer bullets, tools note, disclaimer). 2. UNIQUE [login to view URL] For each page: URL + headline + subheadline + the unique intro (the part before the shared master body starts). These intros are the “small adjustments” made for each audience/page. 3. SHARED UI TEXT (header + form).docx The site header/navigation + the form fields (labels + helper text). Please sanity-check that everything is crystal-clear to a US business owner. Optional: If you want to verify the full context, I can also provide the 10 individual page docs — but the 3 files above contain everything that changes + the shared core. What “success” looks like You give a real rating of how native/natural it reads (1–5). You list specific reasons for that rating (not generic “could be better”). You apply edits directly in the document (Track Changes / Suggesting mode) or provide clear Before→After. Honesty note (important) If the text is already strong, it’s completely fine to say: “4.5/5 — mostly natural; only minor tweaks needed” or “5/5 — no changes needed.” Please don’t manufacture issues to justify a bigger rewrite. If the text truly needs moderate edits, explain exactly what is wrong and fix it in a reviewable way. Also: I verify every claim and every suggested “issue.” Your work/feedback will be reviewed by another experienced editor I trust. I’m only interested in honest, high-quality work. Who I’m looking for US English (native-level), currently based in the US Experience editing marketing / advertising / lead generation / agency / consulting copy (service businesses) Strong “sounds natural” instinct (not only grammar) Please do not apply if your background is only lifestyle/recipes/product descriptions — I need marketing services editing experience. Your task (please read carefully) Step 1) Rate the current text (required) Give a rating from 1 to 5: 5/5 = fully native and smooth, ship-ready 4/5 = good, minor tweaks 3/5 = noticeable non-native/stiff parts, needs real editing 2/5 or below = major issues Then write 2–4 sentences explaining why you gave that score. Step 2) Clarity check (4–6 sentences) Answer: What is the service? Who is it for? What is the CTA / next step? Step 3) “Non-native signals” list (8–15 bullets max) List the top issues that signal non-native writing, e.g.: awkward phrasing/collocations repetitive wording / “AI-like” rhythm unnatural transitions wrong prepositions/articles overly formal or robotic tone No generic feedback — each bullet should reference a specific line/example. Step 4) Apply minimal edits (not a rewrite) Keep the meaning / offer / structure the same Fix only what needs fixing If a line is already good, leave it Deliverable format must be ONE of these: Track Changes / Suggesting mode in the document, OR a clear Before → After list. Important: Notes-only in margins are not enough. I need actual applied edits. Deliverables (summary) 1. Rating 1–5 + short explanation 2. 4–6 sentence clarity summary 3. 8–15 non-native signals 4. Edited text via Track Changes / Suggesting mode OR Before→After 5. Optional: 3–5 style rules for consistency Not in scope No SEO rewrite, no rebranding, no “copywriting from scratch” No changing the offer/business logic No adding new sections unless I ask Budget / pricing request Please quote your rate for read-through + light edits only (copy edit / proofreading / line edits). If your rating is 4.5–5/5 and edits are truly minimal, your price should reflect that. If it’s 3/5 or below, explain why and show real applied edits. To apply (anti-template filter) Start with: “I READ THE INSTRUCTIONS.” Then answer: 1. What marketing/agency texts have you edited before? (1–2 examples) 2. What do you usually fix first when copy feels “non-native”? 3. Your price for this specific task (read-through + light edits only)
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Hello, I am interested and willing to accept your offer.I will always be ready to be hired by you at any time. All of my work has been rated 5 stars by my clients. If you are interested, please contact me. Please see my profile and portfolio here! https://www.freelancer.com/u/Wahyudimisyari
$60 USD em 1 dia
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" Lets Gets Started, You are looking for US-native copy edit + honesty check (marketing services landing copy) — rate it 1–5 first I know you have several tempting proposals here, but I guarantee you to be impressed by my work. I have various skills in Copy Editing and Proofreading. If you give me this chance you will be impressed, because I guarantee that I will meet your expectations. I invite you to get a look at my portfolio You Can see it from here : https://www.freelancer.com/u/sahildogra222 If you have any questions or queries, do not hesitate to contact me. I hope to start working with you. With regards! Sahil
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I am PH.D writer 12+ years of experience, And would have no problem providing you with the HIGH-Quality work you need. All my work is 100% my own and never Copied, Spun or Plagiarized, so you won’t have to worry about that at all. My three core values are EFFICIENCY, QUALITY, and EXPERTISE. I will deliver this work within the stipulated DEADLINE and a guarantee of NON-PLAGIARIZED work. Hire me, and you will get value for your money. Thank you
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My name is Lora, and I'm equipped with over 15 years of experience as a Book Editor and Beta-Reader, specializing not only in fiction and non-fiction works but also in web content. What sets me apart from other editors is my Passion for Perfection. I don't believe in mediocre improvements; instead, I will give you an honest rating of your project's current state and commence meaningful edits based on that assessment. This entails line-by-line Track Changes/Before → After lists for easy review. In your project, my primary aim would be clarity to a US business owner. With my comprehensive background in various editing forms including agency and consulting copy, I'm thrilled at the prospect of turning your marketing services landing copy into Gold. My "Eagle-Eye for Detail" goes beyond grammar into spotting the unconscious 'non-native signals' like unnatural transitions, "AI-like" rhythm or repetitive use of words - problematic areas that may signal non-nativeness but are often mistakenly overlooked. Choosing me not only means you get quality edits but also that you receive collaborative support throughout the process. We will dive into your written world together, ensuring your vision becomes my mission and your intended meaning remains intact. My ultimate goal is to make this daunting task enjoyable and rewarding for you as we transform your copy to its optimal form.
$60 USD em 1 dia
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As a US native with extensive experience in copy editing, I am equipped to meet the unique challenges of your project. My fluency in US English and my understanding of its nuances set me apart from standard editors. Moreover, my background in editing for service businesses- especially those relating to marketing, advertising, lead generation, agency, and consulting domains aligns well with your requirements
$60 USD em 7 dias
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Hello! As a seasoned writer and digital marketing expert, I have a deep understanding of the intricacies of writing copy for service-based businesses - exactly what your project requires. With years of experience editing marketing and advertising materials, I am well-versed in crafting copy that resonates on a native level. My keen eye for detail and astute sense of what sounds natural enables me to make precise line edits without losing the essence of your message. I am well aware that your project entails more than mere proofreading. You need someone trustworthy to evaluate your copy with honesty and accuracy. The fact that you have put in place a system to verify your claims and suggested 'issues', aligns perfectly with the transparent approach I adopt in my work. Moreover as an experienced Virtual Assistant I am known for my organization skills, So the prospect of reviewing multiple pages and organizing everything into compact but comprehensive files is not a daunting task to me at all. In conclusion, I am not just an ordinary writer or editor, I propose that we partner together to ensure the excellence of your final product; let's build something impactful together - where your success truly matters.
$60 USD em 2 dias
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Hi there, I READ THE INSTRUCTIONS. I'm confident I can provide the honest quality assessment and the clean edits you're looking for. As a native US English speaker with extensive experience in editing marketing and advertising copy, I'll ensure the content flows well and resonates with your target audience. I understand the need for clear, trackable changes in your documents and can deliver that feedback effectively. Best regards,
$120 USD em 1 dia
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I will provide an honest, line-by-line evaluation of your copy with a clear quality rating and concrete reasons behind it. My focus is US-English naturalness, rhythm, and clarity for service-based marketing copy—not rewriting or changing your offer. I’ll identify specific non-native signals (awkward phrasing, AI-like repetition, unnatural transitions, tone issues) and reference exact lines where they occur. All improvements will be applied directly using Track Changes or a clean Before→After format, so every edit is reviewable. If the copy is already strong, I’ll say so and keep edits minimal; I don’t manufacture problems to justify work. You’ll receive a clear rating, a concise clarity summary (service, audience, CTA), a focused issue list, and clean, ship-ready line edits aligned across the shared master body, unique intros, and UI text.
$50 USD em 3 dias
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As an experienced editor, I understand the importance of delivering honest feedback that is both constructive and reviewable, which accurately determines the Native American proficiency of your marketing copy. After examining the scope of your description, I am confident that I can fulfill your requirements. With a background in marketing, advertising, and lead generation, my experience aligns perfectly with your project needs. In terms of writing quality, I am proud to offer you an unbiased evaluation along with a detailed list of specific non-native areas that require improvement. Having edited numerous marketing service copies over the years, not only do I specialize in grammar but also in improving readability without altering the core message and structure. Your project is important to me and it will be treated with utmost respect and professionalism. Rest assured that my work will be under scrutiny of another experienced editor to ensure its quality and adherence to your goals. Combining my skills as a seasoned editor with an intuitive understanding of what 'natural' writing reads like in US English, makes me an ideal freelancer for this job.
$100 USD em 7 dias
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Hi! I have experience editing marketing and agency texts, including landing pages, service offerings, and B2B email copy. My focus is always on making content sound natural to a U.S. audience, improving flow, clarity, and the effectiveness of calls to action while keeping your original voice intact. When a text seems “non-native,” I first check tone, sentence structure, idiomatic expressions, and rhythm before focusing on grammar and punctuation. For this project (reading + light edits), my fee is $60 USD. I can provide: A 1–5 rating of the current text with explanation A clear summary of clarity (4–6 sentences) 8–15 bullets highlighting non-native phrasing Actual edits applied in Word using Track Changes or a clean Before→After list Optional 3–5 style rules for consistency I can start immediately and deliver high-quality, honest, and precise edits. Best regards, Marcos
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