i have a first draft paper on the HUMAN RESOURCE in McDonald's...
my professor email it to me back with some feed back and wanted me to add some work like :
What is the strategy of MD?
Need to explain the franchise issue here. What employees are you talking about?
You need to work on your introduction.
You need subheadings – structure the paper better
Too many ideas in each paragraph – be more focused.
Check your grammar.
Where are the references in the body of the paper? (i can do this part because i do have the refernces)
See more comments in paper.
i will attach the paper and please i want it to be just better because i got ( B ) with my first draft and he asked me to improve it if i want to have ( A ) grade.
it wont take more than 30 min ..
it is a paper of about 9 pages only..
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This is the type of thing I do on a daily basis for friends still in school. I am the grammar queen and can have this back to you quickly. You are sure to recieve the A you want.