ASAP....(Human Resource) paper reRwite need it by tomorrow

i have a first draft paper on the HUMAN RESOURCE in McDonald's...

my professor email it to me back with some feed back and wanted me to add some work like :

What is the strategy of MD?

Need to explain the franchise issue here. What employees are you talking about?

You need to work on your introduction.

You need subheadings – structure the paper better

Too many ideas in each paragraph – be more focused.

Check your grammar.

Where are the references in the body of the paper? (i can do this part because i do have the refernces)

See more comments in paper.

i will attach the paper and please i want it to be just better because i got ( B ) with my first draft and he asked me to improve it if i want to have ( A ) grade.

it wont take more than 30 min ..

it is a paper of about 9 pages only..

Habilidades: Reescrever Artigos, Edição, Recursos Humanos, Research Writing, Redação técnica

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