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andreealorena89
- 8 anos atrás
thank you for you feedback. I'll try to make the changes suggested in few hours. now i'm not on my computer. but i'm excited to do those changes.
- 8 anos atrás
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Proprietário do Concurso - 8 anos atrás
Thanks. Suggest maybe trying them individually and then combining some of them?? Maybe they will all work together or maybe not :) Thank you for your entries!
- 8 anos atrás
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Proprietário do Concurso - 8 anos atrás
Experiment with light-green fill or gradient light-green fill in leaves ???
- 8 anos atrás
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Proprietário do Concurso - 8 anos atrás
Trunk is thicker here than immediately below. Directly above it is very thin and then becomes thicker again.
- 8 anos atrás
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Proprietário do Concurso - 8 anos atrás
See ideas above. Very thick lines here; would it be good to thin-down the very thickest lines?
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Proprietário do Concurso - 8 anos atrás
MORE IDEAS: (4) The pattern of leaves seems almost random and like flames; this could be a very good feature. But at small sizes we see less of the leaf shape and we see more of a random-leafed ordinary tree. We are curious how the design would look if the pattern of leaves was more orderly. We especially wonder if this would help the design look distinguished and retain attractiveness when it is rendered in small sizes. It might not work --- we might still end up deciding that the random, almost flame-like pattern is better. (5) The trunk thickness might benefit from a little adjustment; in certain places it seems to become thicker moving towards the top and that might lend a slightly unnatural feel to it.
- 8 anos atrás
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Proprietário do Concurso - 8 anos atrás
Hello, you have one of the higher-rated entries at the moment. Here are some ideas if you wish to try them. (1) what would this design look like if a lighter color green filled the center of each leaf but keeping the darker outer edges? (2) same idea as #1 but a gradient fill the lighter green that darkens toward the outer edge? (3) Some of the leaf use very heavy and thick lines --- what would the design look like if the very heavy lines were made thinner?
- 8 anos atrás
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Proprietário do Concurso - 8 anos atrás
This is going in a pleasant direction. Thank you for the submission very much! I'll have a closer look and try to provide more detailed feedback in a little while when I can devote the attention to it!
- 8 anos atrás
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andreealorena89
- 8 anos atrás
thankyou for your feedback i made some change, please see #38 #41 , if is anythink you want to add or remove, change colors or something else let me know.
- 8 anos atrás
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andreealorena89
- 8 anos atrás
original work, i can provide editable vector .ai format, I'm waiting for your feedback.
- 8 anos atrás
