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Monica's Song

Hello there! My name is Ismael J. López. I am a professional audio engineer and music producer with four years of experience. Also, I've been a lead singer and guitarist for over twelve years. I would love to help you with this song. I've already won a Freelancer contest with a similar topic. I had to compose a country song for a 25th anniversary. You can listen to it in my portfolio, it's called She Makes Me Believe. Let me know if you want to listen to a demo of this lyrics or if they should be polished. Hope you like it! Looking forward to having news from you soon! Best regards, Ismael

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  • ismaellopezr
    ismaellopezr
    • 2 anos atrás

    Hi Clint!

    I'm glad you like this. If you like the verse 2 in general terms we could change the verse to "We met in FFA at North Dakota", as "Dakota" is meant to rhyme with "score at" in the next phrase.

    Anyways, I wrote down something different with the line you asked. Let me know if you like this one better:

    I met her in FFA
    I swear it feels like yesterday when I ask her ‘What’s your name?’
    She was my opponent, but we were meant to be a team
    I saw it on my dreams, it’s true.

    • 2 anos atrás
  • Cliven45
    Proprietário do Concurso
    • 2 anos atrás

    I like this start. Verse 2 ... Instead of "I met her at North Dakota" it should say something along the lines of "I me her in FFA" FFA is pronounced by saying each letter. Thanks

    • 2 anos atrás