Hi, your story sounds intriguing and I'd love to work on it. Evaluation or manuscript assessment is different from a structural edit. I'm a new freelance but a professional writer and editor with knowledge of the sci-fi genre. I will give time and respect to your MS and deliver sensitive, honest and constructive critique.
A MS assessment is a broad overview covering plot structure and character development, voice, pace, major points of conflict/crisis/change in your novel with suggestions for changes or edits using Word's tracked changes and detailed in a written report.
A structural or substantive edit is more detailed, covering plot and character development, author's unique voice, pace, overuse of phrases and words, inconsistencies, tense, tension and crisis points, dialogue, time shifts, editing for clarity, readability, sentence structure and flow, grammar and spelling. I'd also do this as tracked changes to your Word document with a written report.
Proposal:
MS assessment - $400 for up to 50,000 words with written report (based on 150 x 320 words/per page)
Full structural edit - includes a two pass (read) covering all aspects described with edits and other suggested changes in a written report -$720 ($15/1000 words. Fees in accordance with my usual business).
Ethics: Your work remains confidential and is deleted after handover. I'm happy to supply a sample edit on your work.
Payment: Deposit to secure services and payment of balance before handover.
Regards,
Janet