Hello Shafa,
I hope you are doing good! I would like to help your father in getting his dream project published by providing my expertise and experience as an editor and proofreader. I will go through the writing and elevate them without compromising on your father's style of writing.
I don't have any issues with the subject matter of the book, which is religion. Anyway, is it possible for you to share a few excerpts from the manuscript? About the trimming, if awarded the project, I will do the needful.
I always proofread and fix all the issues like (grammar, punctuation, spelling, misused articles, run-on sentences, incorrect coordinating conjunctions, comma splices, verb-subject agreement issues, dangling participles, split infinitives, and other issues). Editing will concentrate more on readability, consistency, and flow of the words.
I would need a turnaround time of one month. If you feel there is a mutual interest, I will welcome the opportunity to chat with you to learn more about the project and how my qualifications would be a good fit.
Thanks,
Deepthi L